【翻译】Faing Eclipse(黯然失色)

•原作者&原网站:Stardust_Steel from Archive of Our Own

•译:斋原花野

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全文信息(摘自AO3,是老数据)

Rating: Teen And Up Audiences

Archive Warning: Creator Chose Not To Use Archive Warnings

Category: M/M

Fandom: Dragon Ball

Relationship: Son Goku/Vegeta (Dragon Ball)

Characters: Son Goku (Dragon Ball)|Vegeta (Dragon Ball)

Additional Tags: kakavegeweek|tumblr: kakavegeweek|Canon Divergence|Angst|Hurt/Comfort|Tails|goku and vegeta really care for eachother and it shows|5+1 Things|Inverted|prompt: afterlife|Sad with a Happy Ending|Bittersweet|Mind the Tags

Language: English

Series: Part 6 of The Sun and Moon

Collections: Kakavege week #10

Stats: Published: 2021-03-16 Words: 2,992 Chapters: 1/1 Comments: 42 Kudos: 137 Bookmarks: 17 Hits: 1,636

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译者的话:

由于英语和中文的差异,我在翻译的过程中会有些许增删,但不多。原文中出现的斜体、亦或是切换字体我一般会直接忽略(因为我是从pdf复制到文档上,所以所有特殊格式都会被清除,我最多能把粗体字还原一下,我尽力了。)

全文采用双语对照格式翻译,如果有需要我会单独发一遍中文版。第一次翻译外网的文章,所以翻译腔可能会很重,谢谢观赏,如果喜欢请给予原作者(Stardust_Steel)支持。

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Summary:

“Kakarot, it’s time to say goodbye.”

“卡卡罗特,该说再见了。”

“Wait, what are you talking about?” Goku asked in alarm. Vegeta’s smile at him was genuine. No barriers, no mask. Just sweet and sad.

“等等,你在说什么?”悟空惊慌地问。贝吉塔的笑容是真诚的——没有防御,没有伪装,只是在悲伤中夹杂了甜蜜。

– or, Five ways Goku and Vegeta said goodbye, and one way they chose to stay together.

——或者,悟空和贝吉塔有五种方式告别,以及一种方式选择在一起。

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Notes:

For Engineerd.

Inspired by Judgement Day by Engineerd.

Why the title?

Where the Sun, the Moon, and the Earth line up- it is called an Eclipse.

赠给Engineerd。

我的灵感来自于Engineerd的Judgement Day(《审判日》)。

为什么要起这个标题呢?

当太阳、月亮和地球连成一线时,这就叫做日食。

To me Goku is the Sun

Vegeta is the Moon

The way their paths line up and diverge in this fic causes an Eclipse. Enjoy.

对我来说,悟空就是太阳,贝吉塔就是月亮。

在这篇文中,他们的路径排列、分离的方式就形成了日食。享受这篇文吧。

This fic is dedicated to and was inspired by my dear friend Engineerd and their fic JUDGMENT DAY. It’s a KakaVege AU with a fake dating premise but in in the afterlife, it’s absolutely AMAZING!!! Their fic inspired part 4 of this fic. I fully give them the credit for this. Please give them some love and kudos! :3

敬以这篇文章献给我亲爱的朋友Engineerd,同时灵感也来自他们的作品Judgement Day。这是一个带有假约会前提的卡卡贝吉AU,不过在来世这绝对是惊人的!!!我完全相信他们这一点。请给他们一些爱和kudo吧!:3

(See the end of the work for more notes.)
(请到本作品的最后看更多的注释。)

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“Where the Sun, the Moon, the Earth line up- it is called an Eclipse.”

“当太阳、月亮和地球连成一线时,这就叫做日食。”

Eclipse in Mirai timeline

未来时空。

Vegeta had never made secret his opinion that Goku had too big of a bleeding heart. So of course, of all the things that would kill Goku off permanently, of course it would be a heart attack.

贝吉塔从未隐瞒过自己的观点——悟空有着极大的同情心。所以理所当然地,在所有能够永久杀死悟空的事情中,无疑是心脏病发作最致命。

Because of the existence of the dragonballs, death was cheap on this backwater mud ball of a planet. But Goku’s was not. No resurrections this time. Not even for their constant hero.

由于龙珠的存在,在这个落后的泥巴星球上,死亡尤其廉价。但悟空的性命并不是这样的廉价。这次没有复活的机会了,他们甚至没有给他们永恒不变的英雄一次。

Goku looked… like a pale shadow of himself, his breath dwindling. In this room where sunlight only filtered in, the threat of the Androids seemed distant, unlike the certain oncoming loss.

悟空看上去……像他自己苍白的影子,他的呼吸越来越急促。在这个只有阳光照进来的房间里,人造人的威胁似乎离他们远了不少,不像某些迎面而来的损失。

Vegeta didn’t even think Goku was even aware of his presence. “Kakarot,” he said, alerting the other man to his presence. Goku’s eyes flickered towards him, and there it was, that little tilt of the lips up.

贝吉塔甚至都不觉得悟空意识到了他在场这件事。“卡卡罗特,”他说,让另一个人警觉到他的存在。悟空朝他眨了眨眼,他的嘴唇微微张开。

How dare he. How dare he look at Vegeta like that-- like nothing was wrong, like he wasn’t about to–

他怎能这么大胆。他怎能这么大胆地看着贝吉塔,像什么事都没做错一样,好像他不会——

How could someone like Goku just --fall to some stupid heart disease? When vegeta had claimed his death. When Goku was supposed to die by his hands.

像悟空这样的人——怎么可能会得这令人火大的心脏病?当贝吉塔宣称他的死因*时。当悟空本该死在他手上时。

(*译者:death本意是死亡,但根据句意我翻译成了死因。在一些与直译不同的地方,我同样做了类似的调整。另外这句中出现小写的Vegeta我猜是作者失误忘记打开首字母大写锁定了,我看整句的句意也应该指的是贝吉塔的名字,所以我还是按照大写的Vegeta翻译了。)

“I always told you your bleeding heart would kill you one day, Kakarot,” Vegeta remarked. Just not in the way they expected.

“卡卡罗特,我一直告诉你你的妇人之仁总有一天会害了你。”贝吉塔提醒道。只是没有以他们期望的样子罢了。

Weak chuckle. “Guess you… were right.”

一声又轻又虚弱的笑,“我猜……你说对了。”

Reduced to two-word phrases. Goku didn’t have much time left.

缩减到一次只说两个字,悟空已经没有多少时间了。

Damn bastard. Always leaving Vegeta in his shadow.

该死的混蛋。 他总让贝吉塔笼罩在他的阴影中。

Vegeta gave in. He did the least likely and most useful thing he could do right then, which was to hold Kakarot close. Letting his tail curl around Kakarot’s forearm.

贝吉塔让步了。他做了那时他能做的最可能的、也是最有用的事情:就是把卡卡罗特抱紧,让他的尾巴缠绕着卡卡罗特的前臂。

The shadow of Goku’s sunlit smile. He could always see right through Vegeta, whatever the animosity between them. “Thank… you… V.”

悟空被阳光照射的笑容只剩下了影子。他总能看透贝吉塔,不管他们之间有多少仇恨。“谢…谢…V。”

Vegeta’s hold tightened slightly, in their strange embrace. Desperately trying not to think of the hundreds of ways this would be the last time he would see his rival, whatever lifetime it was. It didn’t matter. It shouldn’t.

在他们奇怪的拥抱中,贝吉塔抱得更紧了一些。他拼命抑制着“这将是他最后一次见到他的对手,无论他这一生怎样”的想法。它无关紧要,它也应该是无关紧要的。

But …Vegeta wasn’t one for lying, and matter it did.

但……贝吉塔不是个擅长撒谎的人,这很重要。

Goku’s oncoming death was tragic, of course. All his human friends were mourning him, as they should. Privately though, Vegeta felt… relieved. It would bring Goku some much deserved peace, a peace not afforded to Vegeta.

即将降临在悟空身上的死亡毋庸置疑是一场悲剧。他的朋友们都在悼念他,他们理应如此。不过私下里,贝吉塔松了一口气。死亡将会带给悟空一些受之无愧的安宁,那安宁是贝吉塔所得不到的。

There was no place anymore for darkness with Goku’s passing. He would keep his body, be able to train in heaven in the Otherworld. It was time for him to step away, to return to the sun and golden clouds where he belonged. Not with Vegeta whose place was in the shadows cast by the moon. In the coming battle against the androids.*

随着悟空的离世,黑暗势力已无任何立足之地。他将保留他的肉体,在另一个世界里训练。是时候让他离开这里了,让他回到他所属的太阳和金黄灿烂的云彩中了,而不是和贝吉塔一起待在月光撒下的阴影中。

(*译者:in the coming battle这句话我放到下一段翻译了,不然中文翻译的分段会很奇怪。)

(In the coming battle against the androids.)It should have been Vegeta and Goku facing them together, taking turns, heckling at each other. But it was just like Goku to spite Vegeta- his entire existence was basically just to spite Vegeta.

在即将来临的人造人大战中,贝吉塔和悟空本应该一起面对他们,轮流作战,互相嘘寒问暖。但一切都像是悟空故意要刁难贝吉塔一样——他整个的存在基本就只是为了刁难贝吉塔。

Vegeta touched his forehead to Goku’s, his tail tightening. The saiyan gesture for comfort. For greeting hello to someone dear. Also the gesture for goodbye. It had to be irritation, this deep feeling of ache in his heart, because it was too strong to be anything else. It wasn’t fondness. It certainly couldn’t be love.

贝吉塔将他的额头和悟空靠在一起,收紧了他的尾巴。这是赛亚人表示安抚的姿势,向亲爱的人问好,同时也是道别的手势。这种情感一定是恼怒,是他心里深深的痛苦,因为它太过于强烈了,所以它不可能是别的什么情感。它不是喜欢,也肯定不会是爱。

Goku’s tail flicked his, twining around it. Vegeta allowed it. He would remember this, and he knew in the coming years he would miss it terribly - miss Goku- but there was no point in regrets. Meeting again was unlikely at best, impossible at worst.

悟空甩了甩尾巴,缠绕上贝吉塔的那条。贝吉塔允许他这么做了。他将会铭记这一瞬间,他也明白今后他将会无尽地想念这个瞬间,想念悟空——但世上并无后悔药,后悔是毫无意义的。无论好坏,再会都是不可能的事。

Perhaps in another lifetime, or another timeline, they might have had the chance to become something to each other. To stand by each other’s side until the final fall. The Prince and the Legendary, maybe something more. Not this lifetime.

或许在另一个人生中,或者在另一条时间线中,他们可能有“和对方成为某种关系”的机会。直到最终的帷幕落下,他们都将伴在对方左右。王子和传说中的超级赛亚人,他们的故事可能不止这些,但这一生他们并没能续写下去更加壮丽的诗篇。

Goku’s voice was the husk of a rasp. “Fight …well, Vegeta.”

悟空的声音像是锉刀的外壳一样,“好好……战斗,贝吉塔。”

“I will,” Vegeta said. He wasn’t one for lying, but just this once. Goku deserved this. “And you’d better be too, Kakarot. I expect a fierce battle-”

“我会的。”贝吉塔说。他不是会撒谎的那种人,但这次他撒了一次谎。悟空值得听到这种善意的谎言。“你最好也是这样,卡卡罗特。我期待有一次激烈的战斗——”

“-when we meet again-”

“——当我们再会的时候——”

-Whatever lifetime that might be –

——无论这一生如何——

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Eclipse in Z

Z 世界观。

“We make a pretty good team, don’t we?” Goku asked, his words coloured by relief bordering on the hysterical. When Vegeta met those charcoal eyes, the sheer fondness in them took his breath away.

“我们配合的真好,可不是吗?”悟空说道,他的话里充满了近乎歇斯底里的如释重负。当贝吉塔与这双乌黑的眼睛视线相交时,那双眼里流露出的纯粹的喜欢让他无法呼吸。

“Hn.” Vegeta allowed a slight upward tilt to his lips. Goku’s expression morphed to one of pure delight. So easy to read. Goku could do that, he had little emotional barriers. His soul wasn’t something he had to guard.

“哼。”贝吉塔的嘴角微微上扬了一些。悟空的表情变成了纯粹的喜悦。想要读懂悟空的表情太容易了,他没有什么藏在心里的情绪。贝吉塔无需防备他。

His soul that was bonded to Vegeta’s now, after their fusion.

经历了他们的融合,现在悟空和贝吉塔两人的灵魂互相契合了。

Goku held out his palm in that common human way of celebrating, as if he expected Vegeta to take it. His expression was hopeful.

悟空的表情中充满了希望,他以地球人常用的庆祝方式伸出了手掌,似是在等着贝吉塔能够握住它。

Vegeta gazed back, the solemn moment long enough that the Goku’s eyes dimmed a little, his smile uncertain. Something in Vegeta’s chest twinged. Damn it all, but no one had had as much of an impact on Vegeta as this Saiyan before him. No one ever did, or could.

贝吉塔用严肃的表情回望着他,这个时刻持续了很长时间,悟空的眼睛变得有些模糊,他的微笑似真似假。贝吉塔的胸腔里一阵刺痛。该死,在这个赛亚人之前从未有人对贝吉塔产生过这么大的影响过。从来没有人做到过,也没有人能够这样做。

Hesitation was the space of a breath. Vegeta caught the offered palm.

犹豫只是一瞬间的事。贝吉塔抓住了那只伸出的手。

He didn’t expect Goku’s next move. Soft lips brushing his, quick and feather light as though the owner didn’t expect this to be permanent, to be allowed to enjoy this. When Goku drew back, there was a tinge of pink on his cheeks.

他没有预料到悟空进一步的动作。柔软的嘴唇轻拂着他,动作迅速而轻盈,好像主人不希望他可以一直被允许享受这一切。当悟空缩回去的时候,他的脸颊上有一抹粉红色。

“Sorry,” Goku muttered, “I just- I didn’t-”

“抱歉,”悟空喃喃自语道,“我、我不是这个意思……”

Vegeta shut him up with a proper kiss. Saiyans never did things half-heartedly, and in some ways, Goku was as Saiyan as they come.

贝吉塔用一个恰到好处的吻闭上了卡卡罗特的嘴。赛亚人做事从不三心二意,在某些方面,悟空也是赛亚人。

With all the history between them, all the tension, there was no way it wasn’t leading to this moment.

考虑到他们之间的过往,所有的矛盾与冲突,这一刻的到来不是无迹可寻。

When their lips parted, Goku’s eyes held the light of the full moon, drawing Vegeta in. “Vegeta–”

当他们的嘴唇分开时,悟空的眼眸里闪烁着满月的光芒,吸引着贝吉塔。“贝吉塔——”

Vegeta shook his head. He couldn’t help it-- a proper smile broke through the haze of a storm that had ravaged him the past seven years. “Kakarot. You don’t have to explain anything.”

贝吉塔摇了摇头。他忍不住笑了——一个真正的微笑冲破了过去七年里折磨他的风暴的阴霾。“卡卡罗特,你不必解释。”

Their souls had been bonded through fusion, after all. Even physically separated, traces of each other remain.

毕竟融合让他们的灵魂互相契合,即使两人相隔甚远,彼此的痕迹都不会消失。

When Vegeta had burned a path through the stars all those years ago, initiating their fateful first meeting, never did he imagine that he would one day know how Goku looked like when he’d just been kissed.

多年前,贝吉塔在星空中开辟了一条道路,开始了他们命中注定的第一次相见。他从未想过有一天他会知道悟空刚刚被亲吻完的样子。

A sense of peace lingered in the air, mixed with the bittersweet knowledge that this might just be their first and last time.

空气中弥漫着一种平静的气氛,同时也掺杂着一种苦乐参半的感觉,这可能是他们第一次、也是最后一次见面。

Both Vegeta and Goku had other priorities to see to. Much as they had… whatever this was, with each other, neither of them would turn their backs on their families for this. Both had done it for long enough.

贝吉塔和悟空都有其他重要的事情要做。就像他们一样,无论它是什么,他们都不会因此而抛弃自己的家人。两个人都已经做得够久了。

Their lives would keep moving on, and they might just stay in touch, but it was time to go back to ordinary life. At that moment, there was nothing left for either Saiyan to prove.

他们的生活将会继续,他们可能只是互相保持联系而已,但是是时候回归正常生活了。那时候,这两个赛亚人已经没有什么可以证明的了。

Somehow they both knew, or believed, their days of chasing the next limit, chasing each other was over. Neither had to say anything - their soul bond spoke for them.

不知怎么的,他们都知道,或者相信,他们追逐下一个极限、追逐彼此的日子已经结束了。两人都无需多言——他们联结起来的灵魂为他们说话。

They just had to open this door, didn’t they? All the possibilities, all the yearning. Vegeta shook his head. “You never stop surprising me, Kakarot.”

他们只需要打开这扇门,不是吗?所有的可能性也是,所有的憧憬也是。贝吉塔摇了摇他的头,“你从未停下让我惊喜的脚步,卡卡罗特。”

Goku hummed. “Well, it’s mutual.” A heavy pause. “I’ll miss you, Vegeta.”

悟空含糊地说,“嗯……这是相互的。”一阵沉重的停顿,“我会想你的,贝吉塔”。

Vegeta snorted. “Stop being so sentimental, idiot, this isn’t a goodbye. We’ll see eachother again.”

贝吉塔哼了一声,“少摆出一副多愁善感的表情,白痴,这不是道别,我们会再见面的。”

“Yeah, but it won’t be the same,” Goku said, and the thing is, Vegeta understood what he meant.

“是啊,但下次就不一样了。”悟空说。关键是,贝吉塔明白了他话里的意思。

Understood without words that they would see each other again, but they could never come back to this. What it could have led them to.

无需话语就能明白他们会再见面的,但他们却再也回不到现在的这种关系了。这可能会让他们走向什么。

Vegeta inclined his head-- a silent goodbye to what they had before, what could-have-beens, and a well-wish to what lay ahead.

贝吉塔低下了头——他无声地告别了他们以前拥有过的和本该发生的所有,并祝福了未来的一切。

“Who knows,” Goku said lightly. “Maybe in the future–”

“谁知道呢,”悟空轻描淡写地说,“说不定以后——”

–time would line up, and we’d meet in the middle-

——时间将会排列整齐,而我们终会在中间相遇——

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(后面的部分我还有一点没翻译完,因为要开学了,所以赶紧把校对完的部分发上来,不知道下次更新是什么时候了,大概要等中考完了ORZ)

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期待后续

我看过钢铁星辰的这篇!有点悲伤但是非常好!